In Friday, 14 September 2012, we still discussed about paragraph in our writing class. There were four students who presented their paragraph. For the first presenter is Putri. She presented clear paragraph about comparative and proses analysis paragraph. The next presenter is Yogi. He presented confusing paragraph. We can not know what the type of paragraph is, because he have been modified his paragraph. After that, the presenter is Nita. She present about illustration paragraph. The last presenter is Okta. She presented about discripsion paragraph.
There are many points and new knowledge which I could get from discussion:
o) In comparative paragraph, the topic sentence show somethings that we compare is. It can make us know that the paragraph is comparative paragraph.
o) Actually, proses analysis show in points or in steps, but it is better that we show in paragraph. It can easier to learn about the topic sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding sentence, because we discuss about paragraph.
o) The topic sentence not always the whole of the first sentence. Sometimes, we can make the topic sentence by our own sentence.
o) Topic paragraph is in phrase but topic sentence is always in sentence. Topic sentence always have subject and object. That is the difference between topic and topic sentence.
o) The last, we must always remember, if we want to make a good paragraph, it must coherent thoughts from one sentence to the next.
Thanks for Miss Vita and all my friend for your helping to make me understand about all materials. I am sorry if there are mistake in my composition. Finally, don't forget to leave your comments. It can make me improve my skill.